Thanks. I hope you can read and score my essay by the deadline if you haven't yet done so, and give me your opinion.
Please don't be put off as some have by the dense abstract, the essay itself is very readable with blog comments including; "groundbreaking, clearly significant, astonishing, fantastic job, wonderful, remarkable!, deeply impressed", etc.聽 I believe the ontology I construct is fundamentally consistent with model mechanics as well presented in your excellent essay, but am very interested in your own views.
Very best of luck in the final scoring. I believe and hope you agree mine is also worth a top score. Best wishes.