Dear Mr. Alves,
Your highly technical treatise was most absorbing, though in many parts I had difficulty following it. I will therefore state my comments along the broadest lines.
Though there is much that interested me in your exploration of defining observation mathematically, my view is that even if the emergence of random outcomes could be explained and contextualized by reconfiguring the nature of space-time, or in a variety of mathematical ways, the nature of information would remain unchanged: It would still define the Observer's 'patch of reality' at any given moment, and it would continue to do so throughout evolution.
To consider that mathematics can one day capture all of reality is to ignore the perpetual nature of evolution; inadvertently, we then return to the concept of an absolute underlying reality, one that dismisses both the evolution of the Cosmos, and of its Observer.
I consider that we are involved in a distinctive human Cosmos, one that displays a continuous correlation between Bit and It over the course of evolution; in this system, the observer does not interact with the whole field of reality, regardless of how probabilities emerge, or of how mathematical parameters might re-define them.
Physics and Mathematics is the projection of the human mind on to the Cosmos - it will always be this, and it will always be entirely composed of Bits, thus keeping the Bit-It conundrum relevant to any definition of the Cosmos. My interest is, rather, to see how Physics and mathematics might account for the consistent contiguity of Bits and Its at every instant of evolution - whatever the nature of space-time.
It would be interesting, then, if your mathematical definition of observation could be applied to this larger context. Our parameters would then be enlarged considerably, and we would essentially be able to compute our own evolution, and even to control it.
As you can probably tell, this is one of the strands of my essay - which I think you would find interesting for the reasons I've stated.
Yours is a very serious work, one with consequences; I think you will find much to interest you in the Correlation of Bit to It I describe in my essay. Let me know.
All the best,
John