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Hello Georgina.
I have read your paper for the most part and waded over your website. Although you have clearly put a lot of thoughts in this construction, it is calling for improvements in many ways.
1.- It is not clear what is the problem that you are solving. Thus it is hard to assess what is the contribution you are putting on the table.
2.- The paper needs to be more argumentative than declarative. In each section, I would suggest posing the problem first, then educate the reader on your views and methods, and then make it clear what your solution is.
3.- You may have to makeup your mind if this is a physics paper or a philosophy of physics or epistemology paper. If the former, it is good to have equations show up throughout, they are good stuff because they constrain your mind in a rigorous manner. If the latter, then I would do an awful more work with the illustrations, putting them in the middle of the content as appropriate.
4.- The illustrations are too dense and of difficult interpretation. They are not really helping the text in my sense. I would heavily break them down to simple schematics and multiply them throughout the text.
5.- You may find that you could be better off breaking this material into several papers. Your content has the structure of a book: when you have so much to put under a section, the content would do better under a breakdown per Chapter instead. But you may not have enough material for a book. But your blocks are definitely too dense.
6.- When making historical references in the text, don't assume that the reader knows the story under a term or a certain nomenclature. Your reader may or may not know. So be sure to explain what the story is.
7.- When all that is done, I suggest that you review your abstract and make it as appealing and true to content as you can. Remember that the abstract (and title) is your pitch to get readers, if unappealing you may get no readers.
But I congratulate you for your work anyway. You have done a lot of mentation. The reason why we have so many serious problems of interpretation in physics is because physicists have always been too reliant on math in order to show their genius while being highly deficient in philosophical mentation. Keep going!