Just for the records. Similar paper withdrawn by Metrologia, the journal of the BIPM. See Editor's reason and my reply...
"Our decision on your article: MET-100189. We regret to inform you that the Editor has recommended that your article should not be published in the journal, for the reasons given below - I believe this subject is already covered in section 1.5 of the SI Brochure. There is no justification to a reference to the "Earth's surface" in the definition of the second. The second is a proper unit and the definition is valid in the vicinity of the instrument realizing the unit, wherever the instrument is".
My reply:
Thank you for considering my manuscript and commenting. This is appreciated not withstanding the withdrawal of the manuscript. The comments also afforded me the opportunity of re-reading the section 1.5 of the SI brochure.
Regarding the Editor's comments, there appears to be a discrepancy on the one hand in saying "definition is valid in the vicinity of the instrument realizing the unit, wherever the instrument is", when "wherever" could imply not being on Earth but in outer space, such as the International Space Station. While on the other hand, section 1.5 of the SI brochure disagrees and points out that "frequency standards, differ by about 1 part in 10^16 per metre of altitude difference at the surface of the Earth" and that "Effects of this magnitude cannot be neglected when comparing the best frequency standards". In other words, where the instrument is is important and cannot be neglected.
The manuscript concurs with the thinking of the statements in the SI brochure but suggests that as the thermodynamic environment was expressly included in the definition of the second by putting at 0 Kelvin, the gravitational environment should similarly be included and not put in a sub-section for reference only.
There may be no grounds for appeal so I accept your decision if it cannot be reviewed.
Many thanks.