Dear Hoekstra, Preston,
I must say am happy I got to read your essay. It was erudite.
But your view of the human mind is very much that of sabine hossenfelder's essay. And her's even goes ahead to show how we may "improve" (meddle) with the brain unlike yours (thankfully).
It seems to me such views as expressed by your two essays stem from putting way too much weight on the present understanding of Darwin's theory of evolution. This theory is not even "quantized" yet. Here is what I mean, any progression (picture a stair case) can be viewed MINIMALLY in two ways: as an ascendance (in the Darwinian sense that the mind has evolved from lower life and hence will continue to evolve; as negative entropy) or as a descendance (in the sense of entropy in 2nd law of thermodynamics so that the mind is an ideal state like ideal gas which observably degrades into non-life phenomena).
These two views are not choice to be made, they are LOGICAL NECESSITY; any successor function must have this dual property (similar to a wave/corpuscular nature). So Darwin's theory is only one side of the picture, it is classical; it has yet to be "quantized".
However, your basic thesis is to me most inspiring namely: to manage the future of man we must manage his mind/mindset. You say, "Minds are central; they are the foundation of humanity's past, its present, and its future. Human minds are the root cause of all problem-solving inefficiencies, but they are also the only creative engines capable of taking on each of these challenges, and of designing and building a better future."
I think your essay deserves better rating and am going to give it but I'll appreciate your own critique of my own approach
to this subject.
Best,
Chidi