Dear Mr. Coryat,
Nice twist on the "rubber sheet" analogy of gravity. Actually this is very distinct from the usual way the rubber sheet analogy is used to present Einstein's theory of GR. A colleague of ours (Gary White) has done a fair amount of work on quantifying to what extent the rubber sheet analogy "works". This can be found in "The shape of "the Spandex" and orbits upon its surface" by G.D. White and M. Walker, American Journal of Physics 70, 48-52 (2002) and "On trajectories of rolling marbles in cones and other funnels", by G.D. White, American Journal of Physics 81, 890-898 (2013). But again this work deals mostly with the usual way the rubber sheet analogy if used, but may be of interest. By the way one of the outcomes of Gary's research was that spandex is the thing to use rather than rubber at least for this canonical version of the rubber sheet analogy.
Anyway a very good and lucid video on warping of space-time = gravity. Best of luck with the contest.
Mike, Max, Dan, Simon, Doug