As I said I appreciate the general ideas of your essay, as a logical argument against some widespread conceptions, but still I have remarks. That is, what does the landscape of logically possible laws of physics, look like. Of course as you explained we can abstractly consider any ugly arbitrary law as a "possible law", and in this vast chaotic landscape of "possible laws", find many possibilities of biological evolution similar to what happened on Earth, with the difference that the fundamental laws would not be intelligible. However it seems to me (and maybe I read from other sources) that, among all "possible laws" able of biological evolution, our particular laws (quantum field theory, the standard model) differ from the rest of this landscape not just by their intelligibility, but also in other ways : something like, apart from modifying the values of physical constants, they are not so much modifiable in the small details of their consequences without destroying all their mathematical coherence.
Namely, while we can conceive of possible variants (such as was hypothesized as alternatives to the Higgs boson, some supersymmetric models now refuted, etc), they are not so many (if we want to restrict the study to simple ones, thought the motivation for this restriction may be questioned, e.g. for its links to intelligibility). For example, there are not so many conceivable kinds of particles that are mathematically coherent in quantum field theory. The Higgs boson was predicted because there are not many logical possibilities of what may give a mass to particles. We may see it as a beauty of mathematics (a restriction on the number of possibilities, and some of the most elegant ones are actually realized).
More importantly, there are not many logically conceivable alternatives to quantum physics that behave in a roughly similar manner. It is even doubtful whether there is such a logical possibility at all. An important search for such things is the spontaneous collapse theories, however usual attempts of such theories violate both relativistic invariance and the conservation laws, even if very slightly. But a violation of conservation laws, even a very slight one, is something that (when formulated in proper terms) General Relativity dismisses as absolutely impossible. Thus, when trying to conceive logical alternatives that would also lead to a biological evolution, they may have to either be very different from how things go in our universe (very different chemistry, etc), or be of the form "These laws do not always apply, they are sometimes broken", but still in ways that do not result in breaking the whole Universe apart (as "breaking conservation laws" would logically imply), that would be... very odd kinds of laws.
But what I see remarkable about the trouble in trying to locate our laws of physics in a landscape of logical possibilities, is not only the lack of phenomenologically similar possibilities (beyond variations of the values of physical constants) but also that it is questionable whether the laws we found of our universe (quantum physics) may meaningfully be considered as a logical possibility at all. Because if we strictly look at them as a logical possibility, then it logically drives us to the Many-worlds interpretation. But, how can a many-worlds universe be considered as a real universe at all ? It does not look like one ; it is questionable (and a metaphysical question) whether we can make sense of "probabilities" in it, unlike the effective role of probabilities (the Born's rule) in our physical reality.
And, in connection with what I explained in my essay, I see all this as not a trouble, but as the simple consequence of the fact that the whole discussion, as followed by Tedmark and other scientific circles, is usually expressed in the wrong terms. Because if the question is about the possibilities of real universes, then it has to involve an ingredient of "reality" beyond mathematical existence, i.e. beyond pure logic, and this ingredient is consciousness. Since, due to its non-mathematical nature, this ingredient cannot be located in any mathematical landscape of possibilities, the very expression of "logical possibility" is not applicable to it.
For more details, see my notes on spontaneous collapse and the Many-worlds.