Hi Sylvia--
Thank you very much for your comments. In particular, I am grateful for your constructive criticism.
I don't know about you, but I find these essays quite difficult to write. There is a strict page limit; yet we are to assume that our readers are not experts. Accordingly, I endeavor to explain everything as I go and, hopefully, in a readable and entertaining fashion. Inevitably, important matters are left unaddressed. Believe it or not, I had a section on the difference between countable and uncountable infinite sets and how math is handled in such cases. I cut it out of the essay for reasons of space limitation and because I thought it was layering on too much complexity for a lay audience. Similarly, I had wanted to address the issue of non-standard natural numbers (and other such examples) vis-à-vis Bravo, but had to refrain for reasons of page limits. Obviously, if I had been writing for peer review, I would have adopted an entirely different tone and approach to the subject.
You are quite right to point to flaws in my essay. For example, as you say, I should have written "subsets of infinite sets" vice "subsets of infinity". I cringe at that mistake!
On the issue of mixing infinite cardinalities with probability measures, I think that we actually agree. You say that you don't buy my "50-50" argument for Boltzmann Brains. Good. I don't buy the 50-50 argument, either! That's why I called it a "crapshoot" and put the 50-50 phrase in quotes. Furthermore, to highlight my point, I write in the very next sentence: "I put 50-50 in quotes because, in my opinion, probability breaks down at infinity ...". Or, as you put it, "such a measure is simply undefined". The point of this part of my essay was to criticize physicists who are mixing these two concepts.
Where we may disagree is on the subject of using "natural density" as a probability measure in physics. Of course, I agree that natural density makes sense when addressing mathematical infinity. In mathematics, natural density is "natural" because the algorithm for constructing it is clear and precise. In the physical world, not so much. As you know, cosmologists having been struggling for 30 years to define a "natural" probability density for "infinite multiverse" scenarios--and they have universally failed. The main thrust of my essay was to reject such searches by seeking a finite Bravo, instead. Furthermore, in principle, we are only capable of taking a finite number of samples, of a finite size, of any population, regardless of whether said population is assumed to be finite or infinite. In the physical world, infinity has got nothing to offer.
Once again, thank you for taking the time to provide such insightful substantive constructive criticism. I am honored that you were kind enough to rate my essay 7/10. Finally, I would love to see any references that you may care to share. Please feel free to contact me at my work address, parsons@american.edu.
Very best regards and luck to you in the contest,
Bill.