Dear Luca,
Your essay raised some interesting points and had a strong emphasis on the theory of CArl Friedrich von Weizsaecker. The first time I got exposed to his views was in fact through an essay in another one of these contests; you may find it interesting, it was written by Charles Raldo Card, and he set in comparison with some other views:
http://fqxi.org/community/forum/topic/1837
Concerning temporal operators, perhaps you may already be familiar with the work of Arthur Prior, but he used the same kind of modal logic to define temporal operators with Kripke Semantics that I am also using. Google him if you are not familiar with him.
Regarding the connection between Logic (and, more generally, philosophy), mathematics and physics, you are certainly correct that time is one of the major pieces that brings such a connection about. I am not convinced by the the currently popular view that time comes out of thermodynamics because it is already present, deeply embedded, as it were, in the structure of Minkowski spacetime, even in the absence of matter, or only a few particles.
Your last point comes close to one of the projects that I intend to tackle next, namely learning Von Neumann's approach of building up the Hilbert Space from orthomodular lattices. I believe this exercise will help me make it much clearer how my model relates to various aspects of standard QM.
Thank you and best wishes,
Armin