Hi Sara,
Any essay that works in some soccer references is good in my book. I like the analysis of information encoding being essential for life, but I think this may still be possible in a deterministic system.
You talk about information being lost in your node system when there are many-to-one mappings. I intuitively agree, but there could be a way around this. I think if the many-to-one mapping happens below the level at which the universe emerges (or outside the system), this may not be an issue that violates what Leonard Susskind refers to as the Zeroth or Minus 1st law of physics, which is that information is never destroyed. Are you familiar with Wolfram's causal networks? They are a node based systems where different updating orders still correspond to the same causal networks. Maybe in that sense information outside the system is loss, but information viewed from within the system is not. I don't think your node model and his node model are trying to explain things at the same scale, but it may still be worth a look...Maybe there are some ideas there that will help you and Paul flesh out your theory some more.
I definitely think information is essential, and I like node models, so I'm interested to see how your work evolves.
Please check out my Digital Physics movie essay if you get the chance.
Thanks,
Jon