Watching the Construction of a New Wing by Jeffrey Michael Schmitz

Hi Jeff

I found your idea of mistakes being mandatory for something to be identified as intelligent quite fascinating. It is true that I have allowed for mistakes (flaws) in my own modeling of intelligence, but that was incidental, and I had not thought about it as explicitly as you have.

It is also interesting that you state that supercomputers might not be intelligent but the average toaster might be considered as intelligent. I am not sure but it is possible that the difference between the two might come down to their capability to self-regulate. Toasters can but supercomputers can't. The biological mechanisms that you identified as being intelligent can also self-regulate. You correctly state that scientific method is 'part' of an intelligent system without being intelligent itself.

I liked your style of writing and wish you had written more on the subject. Nevertheless, I think this essay is way better than the average essay (I am rating it accordingly) because of your clear thought regarding mistakes being necessary for a system to be considered as intelligent.

Regards, Willy

Dear Jeff,

Thanks for coming back to my essay! And thanks for your critique. I'll think about that. It's difficult to know essay ranking dynamics, complicated by the trolls who deal out '1's for who knows what reason. Anyway I read your essay with your request in mind. It's difficult to say. You write well. Your info is generally understandable. One commenter above asks what is 'small' -- quantum? You answered "that is too small and I should have said that." I agree. Your first sentence says "start small" to understand the universe, and your last sentence keeps to that theme, so it's relevant to define 'small' in this sense.

I like that you say "an intelligent system will make mistakes." If it lacks mistakes, it is doubtful it is an intelligent system. I do not recall seeing that stated elsewhere, and it is an interesting point. It appears original so I think you could've expanded on this more than you did. For example, "no mistakes" seems to imply deterministic, whereas learning behaviors provide adaptability, but sometimes fail or sometimes learn the wrong thing. You do discuss some of this with respect to mutation. You might discuss 'mistake' versus 'error'. The goal oriented system will not work without an error signal. The error signal provides the information needed to steer towards the goal.

I was also confused by your use of "intelligent". Your first sentence in your abstract says "intelligent creates ideas" and "finds order in chaos". On page 2 you define the necessary features. Then you discuss a supercomputer versus toaster. And the intelligence of a tree. I think this could of been expanded on or clarified in some way.

Jeff, the only thing I can think of to help with future essays [since you asked] would be to use headers to break the flow. You have so many ideas, one after the other, and they are not simple ideas. It is difficult to see where things are going as one reads through the essay. It sounds trite, but I know you've seen long comments on the web, followed by a comment to the effect that "paragraphs are your friend". The use of headers or interior titles both helps the reader focus on the theme being discussed next, but it also helps my writing as it tells me what to focus on to convey in that section. (Sometimes the header changes after I have written the section.) Sometime I write without headers, then I come back and insert them and this may cause me to re-write the section. That's about the only helpful advice I could find. Just think of it as an outline to organize the flow -- for yourself and your readers.

Thanks again for coming back to my essay. I always find the second reading gives me a better appreciation of complex essays, and these FQXi essays are complex.

My best regards,

Edwin Eugene Klingman

Hi Jeffrey

Thanks for your comments on "Traveler & Terrain...." Curious as to what statements you would have left out.

I read your paper and found it a comfortable ramble through familiar territory. I judge that you will have to budget your time to allow for your persistent curiosity in things large and small. I recognize the condition quite well - looking for deep meaning in any little oddment of experience. I don't know if there is a cure, but we seem to be in good company.

Regards,

Don

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Hello Jeff,

I enjoyed your essay, and I went through it twice so I could be sure to grasp your intended meaning. I think you would greatly enjoy the book "Turbulent Mirror" by Briggs and Peat, which fleshes out some of what you left unsaid very nicely, and follows a similar theme. My main interest in that book is its focus on what I call the far shore of chaos. In my formulation, the presence of randomness comes from the accumulation of too much order in dissimilar patterns, which forces irregularity or roughness to appear, where the patterns are in conflict.

So in effect; chaos emerges from order. But on the other side of randomness, things become orderly again, so that there are regimes of order within chaos, if things are allowed to vary continuously. According to Noether, observed conservation laws are equivalent to symmetries, so the study of symmetry is very prominent in Physics. But as you say; entropy prevails given enough time and space to have its action, so this suggests the universe as a whole is asymmetric when considering its progression over time.

In terms of the patterning of the octonions, building of order is stage 4, the onset and increase of chaos is stage 5, and the far shore of chaos is stage 6 phenomenology. But this interplay is easily observed in the Mandelbrot Set, if we home in on any of its branching Misiurewicz points. A theorem of Tan Lei states that the symmetry becomes more and more exact the farther we zoom in, but the reverse is also true - where the structures bounding any Misiurewicz point are asymmetrical, reflecting the global asymmetry of M. So we see an interplay between exact local symmetries and global asymmetry - just like the universe.

I believe in everything you say Jeff, but I see much of the pattern and phenomenology as arising from pure Mathematics.

All the Best,

Jonathan

One more thought..

While Gödel's proof limits the facts we can derive from any formal system, it does not limit in any way what we can do with discovered knowledge. Hilbert and Whitehead both gave up on their attempts to unify Math, because of Gödel's proof, but we did not have detailed maps of figures like E8 and the Mandelbrot Set. I think that if these discoveries had come earlier, what we can know despite the limitations would have been more apparent, and they never would have been forced to admit defeat.

All the Best,

Jonathan

Thanks for the thoughtful consideration..

Regards, JJD