Dear Luca,
your essay touches on many interesting notions, and sketches some intriguing arguments. Indeed, it's so rich that I unfortunately found myself a bit lost, in places, and could not always follow the thread of argumentation you present. Perhaps it's owed to the contest's length constraints---which lord knows I've had my own struggles with---but I felt perhaps you might've chosen to focus more on one smaller aspect of your imaginative tapestry, to better bring it into view.
Your notion of 'semantically closed theory' of course immediately evokes Heisenberg's 'closed theories'---as you later note yourself. However, I think you're right in drawing the dividing line between your concepts: Heisenberg's notion is essentially a syntactic one, where the change of any of its elements threatens inconsistency, hence making closed theories perfectly rigid frameworks, and theory-change an often revolutionary process.
You want to include not just the theories' framework, but also the meat, so to speak---not just the axioms, but also, the model they apply to, and bake that into a 'closed' edifice. You mention Gödelian difficulties for such an undertaking, but I think that another source of difficulty is more dangerous here: in general, due to Tarski's undefinability theorem, theories can't formalize their own semantics, and hence, there's a sort of 'gap' between the formal structures and the things they apply to. So, is your proposal that a theory, as it's usually understood (i. e. as just the formal, structural part) is simply not complete, but must include that which the theory is supposed to be about, or do you claim there's a unity here---that each theory brings its domain of applicability with itself?
I also appreciated the reference to von Weizsäcker. I think perhaps his notion of the 'Kreisgang' ('moving in circles', maybe) might be appropriate: you liken the semantically closed theory to something that comes back to its initial assumptions, but to von Weizsäcker, that wouldn't necessarily be a damaging notion---he thought that, coming back to our initial notions means we can obtain a refined understanding of them, cast them into a new light, and that, in fact, all knowledge generation is just coming back to the same principles at higher levels of appreciation.
Anyway, I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Cheers
Jochen