Dear Abhjnan Rej,
I am working my way through your interesting essay, but wondered if you had accidentally made a circular argument that will affect your conclusions.
Specifically, on page 3, you determine the average rank of a D3-brane as 16/5 ~ 3 or 16/4 = 4.
In my own models, I equate rank with dimensionality. Thus, our 3 1 dimensional spacetime has revealed the Standard Model with rank 2 1 1, but has not revealed the rank 4 Georgi-Glashow SU(5) GUT (because an unbroken 4-D Spacetime allows more phenomena than a broken 3-D Space 1-D Time).
My Yang-Mills models led me to consider a rank-4 SU(5) Georgi-Glashow, a rank-6 SU(7), a rank-10 SU(11) (Georgi also considered an SU(11))and a rank-12 SU(13). IF these Yang-Mills models are a proper way to consider gauge/ tensor unification, AND IF these gauge/ tensor ranks correspond to dimensions, then my model is 12 dimensional. (On a side note, if Emile Grgin and Florin Moldoveanu are correct about the relevance of quantions, then it seems unnatural to develop an odd-dimensioned 11-D M-theory out of even-dimensioned 2-D quantions. Now a 12 dimensional theory doesn't sound so radical.)
True, the D3-brane is relevant to our 3 1 dimensional spacetime, but I don't consider your extrapolations (based on your Ref [14]) into multiple dimensions to be any more foundational than my own (which are based on naturally-occurring crystalline symmetries).
I haven't finished reading your paper. I may have more observations or questions later.
Good luck in the contest!
Ray Munroe