Dear Narendra Nath,
I knew I had read your paper once before. On Oct. 2nd, I posted the following review on my blog site:
"I read your short essay. Some points could have been explained better (such as baryonic vs. non-baryonic and the strong nuclear force/ color confinement). I don't think that quantum mechanics "evolved" out of classical physics - QM really represents a paradigm shift so tremendous that it disturbed one of its founding fathers, Einstein. Oddly enough, the first three pages seem to indicate that we know nearly everything. Prominent physicists thought the same way at the end of the Nineteenth Century - they sure were wrong!
At the end of your 3 pages of Significant Developments, you said "Physics of the early universe may require some radically different approach conceptually!" This is what Lawrence Crowell and I are working on. Can we extrapolate back to that early time and deduce what physics must have been like then, and explain why (via broken symmetries and dimensional collapse) we observe the present laws of Physics? I don't think that someone flipped a switch on to create the Big Bang, and then flipped that switch off to create the present Universe. The theories must blend into each other in a predictable manner.
In Overall Comments, you said "What physics cannot hope to do? Some expectations outlined above may never get fulfilled." I understand that we may be near the observation limit, but I hope that mankind will continue to ask these questions and push towards answers."
Those were last month's comments. I didn't score your paper last month. The following are this month's comments (after a second read).
You said "It may well be advisable to attempt instead conducting more accurate and precise space experiments in order to understand more and more of what transpired cosmologically in the early universe - a challenge too!" I agree. The LHC center-of-mass energy is sufficient to probe Weak-scale phenomena, but not Gravity-scale phenomena. We need to use every experimental trick available to us. Although we have studied cosmic rays for decades, I think this could be the source of our next major experimental breakthroughs. It is a shame that experimental techniques lag theoretical speculation which lags science fiction... It was relevant to mention "Star Trek".
You also said "We hardly expect to arrive at any finality of understanding." My essay is "A Geometrical Approach Towards A TOE". I think it lays down framework for a possible unification of the four fundamental forces, all fermions, and all bosons. In this respect, I think it is fair to call it a TOE of Particle Physics. Would that make it a TOP (Theory Of Particle Physics)? But I agree that we should be suspicious of any claims that we have arrived at a finality of understanding. In another paper, Frank Martin DiMeglio claims that the Dream unifies Gravity and Electromagnetism. The irony is that humankind might understand more about Gravity and Electromagnetism than we understand about the Dream/ Mind/ Soul. We can't understand everything as long as we don't understand the Dream/ Mind/ Soul.
You also said "For Physics to grow, let us leave the psychology of absoluteness/perfectness and instead adopt ways and means that are free from bias and consider 'freedom of thought' supreme." I agree that biases are a problem. I received many scores of 1's in this contest with few critiques against my work. Did they object to my paradigm or my math or my presentation?
I think it was a good introduction to a paper - it was just way too short. It introduced many good topics for possible essays, but never delved into any of the ideas very deeply. Many of the contestants (me included) chose overly ambitious ideas and wrestled with the length limitations. I could have made my paper exactly 10 pages plus a reference page long, but decided that it had enough detail in it.
Good Luck in the contest!
Ray Munroe