Raymond,
As well as touching a harmonic resonance with a proposition emergent from my own thesis your essay was a pleasure to read for all other reasons too. Clarity and brevity are included as a boon when tiring of wading through incomprehensible complexity.
I too derived a recycling cosmos at multiple scales based on the AGN's at galaxy centres (SMBH's) and as an astronomer I can confirm real findings and data back up the concept. Perhaps not continual feeding on a day to day basis but certainly continuous in cosmic time. My 2011 Essay discusses the concept, 2020 Vision also published in more detail here; Helical CMBR Asymmetry.. I certainly then agree your intuition is excellent.
But I hope you'll also read my essay this year "The Intelligent Bit" (not least because I hope you may score it well!) though you may perhaps find me guilty of cramming too many components into the ontological construction. Indeed the full complex power of Bell's Theorem itself is a little beyond most. I'd be interested how much you can glean from my ontology.
Well done for yours. I think it's worth a higher spot and will help there. And the very best of luck in the competition.
Peter