Dear Doctor Hitterdale,
Your abstraction filled essay was quite engrossing to read and I do hope that it does well in the competition. I only have one minor quibble about it, and I do hope you do not mind me mentioning it.
You wrote: "According to some thinkers all of this is about to change. We human beings are within a few decades, or maybe a century or so at most, of something called "The Singularity".
As I have gone to enormous lengths to explain in the clearest language possible that I employed in my splendid essay, REALITY, ONCE, Everything real and imagined in the real Universe is unique, once. It has always been singularity Doctor. It will always be singularity because only singularity is real.
Glad to clear that up.
Best regards,
Joe Fisher