Dear Alma,
Congratulations for a very interesting and well written essay. You have an enjoyable writing style, and some of your sentences have a literary feel - almost poetic! I really liked the spherical cow in the void, the light bulb growing leaves, and the list of ailments that befell our biggest mathematicians... I could almost feel their pain! You should start a blog or write a book...
I found your section "The Shape of Things to Come" very interesting and original. It is interesting to try to evaluate how many mathematician-hours have been clocked over the course of civilization, and I share your optimism that "There is still time for math."
One of the main ideas of your essay is, if I understand you correctly, that you hold on to the hope that we will one day be able to prove that "there aren't so many self-consistent recipes to build a universe from nothing" --- in other words, you hope that we will one day be able to answer by the negative the question that Einstein asked, "Did God have any choice when he created the Universe?" I agree that it would be quite an achievement --- but I also believe that it's very unlikely that we will ever reach that conclusion, because I don't see how the very specific ways that our universe is put together (all those families of particles (not to mention dark matter), all the particular values of the fundamental constants) is the only possible way a universe can be put together. I have a question for you: do you think that it's possible that we could show one day, from first principles, that the proton has to exist, and has to be 1860 times more massive than an electron?
Near the beginning of your essay, I had trouble understanding what you mean when you state that it's possible that "there are hidden logical rules in the universe that make math obey a course and one course only." Are the rules of logic specific to a particular universe? In my opinion, there is only one logic, irrespective of the existence of any universe --- logic, like math, just is. I also don't believe that math obeys one course and one course only --- for me, math is the general study of structures, so math is infinite, even if our knowledge of math cannot be infinite and could very well be limited by our minds, even by the kind of universe we live in. If you have time to elaborate on this subject, I would appreciate it.
So far, I have read over 70 essays, and in my opinion yours is clearly one of the best --- I hope you make it to the finals, and I have rated it accordingly. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Cheers!
Marc
P.S. We do agree on one thing: "math does what math wants". I just believe that math wants to do it all!